【習(xí)作要求】

　　看圖寫話
　　根據(jù)所給圖示，以"Wang Lei's Busy Day"為題，寫一篇不少于50字的短文，內(nèi)容必須符合圖意，語(yǔ)意連貫，句式規(guī)范，字跡工整。（正文第一句已給出） 
 
Wang Lei's Busy Day
　　     It was March 8th yesterday.
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　　【參考范文】

　　It was March 8th yesterday. It was Women's Day. Wang Lei wanted to do something for his mother. He went shopping and bought much food. Then he cleaned the room. He did his best to do some cooking. When his mother came back after work, she was very happy. Wang Lei was very tired, but he felt pleased. （58個(gè)詞）

　　【名師點(diǎn)評(píng)】

　　先"看準(zhǔn)題意"：題目是Wang Lei's Busy Day。寫作要圍繞王雷一天中所忙碌的事情的順序展開。描述昨天的事應(yīng)該用過(guò)去時(shí)。從題意理解中即可"規(guī)范格式"：本文用記敘文格式去寫。再"按點(diǎn)組句"：
　�。�1）3月8日為婦女節(jié)。→It was Women's Day.
　�。�2）王雷去商店購(gòu)物。→Wang Lei went shopping and bought much food.
　　（3）王雷打掃衛(wèi)生。→He cleaned the room.
　　（4）他燒飯。母親回家很高興。→He did the cooking. When his mother came back, she was very happy.

　　完成組句后，"連句成段"，可加上句子間的銜接句子。如在（1）與（2）之間可加上Wang Lei wanted to do something for his mother.

　　在最后可再談王雷一天的感受：He was very tired, but he felt happy.把這些句子連成段后，最后"通篇潤(rùn)色"。