I have an English teacher.She is Mis.Liu.She is from China.She has a short brown hair.There are two big eyes,a small mouth in her round face.She is also a funny person.We ofen feel happy in her lesons.She always help us with our study,too.So we all love our English teacher.

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My English teacher is Miss Liu. She has got short brown hair and a round face with two big eyes. She is a very interesting person, so we often feel happy in her class. And she always help us with our English study. So we all love her very much. 

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