Spring is coming, the bird flew back from the south. Let's embrace spring!

  In the spring, all things recovery. The grass and willow tree sprouted in the growth of slowly. The twittering swallows, also don't know what to say. Naughty children, in the field will always pull out a piece of green bristlegrass, diao in the mouth, then leisurely lying on the ground. Pear, peach blossom tree branches all the full of flowers. Sometimes, there are two children too boring, picked up the various kite play up.Spring, the season of spring outing. In this season, flowers, natural to see too much. Parks are crowded with people, just before a plant flowers surround people also have a dozen.

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Spring is coming, the birds have flown back from the south. Let's embrace spring!

In spring, all things come to life. The grass and willow trees sprout slowly. The swallows are flying around and twittering. Naughty children in the field always pick up the green bristlegrass, puting in the mouth and lying on the ground. Pear, peach blossom tree branches are all full of flowers. Sometimes, there are children flying kites. Spring, is the season for outing. In this season, parks are always crowded with people who come to smell the flowers and enjoy themselves.

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    五年級(jí):范韶康

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