The sunshine sprinkled in, warm in my heart, do you smell the smell of spring, heard the footsteps of spring? Yes, a nice spring again!      Come on, let's embrace spring! In this beautiful season. Sing us, beautiful spring!     In this beautiful spring, we together hand in hand to create a better future! Implement your own dream. Let's go get friendship!

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The sun shines brightly. And the weather becomes warmer and warmer. I can smell the fragrance of spring and hear the footsteps of spring. Come on, let's embrace spring! To welcome this beautiful season, let's sing and dance together! In this beautiful spring, let's hand in hand to create a better future together! Let's go and make our dream come true! 

修改老師：Crystal老師
 

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