Spring has come quietly, we still stay in the winter of the cold. It's time to forget the cold embrace of the spring.  Spring, a season of recovery; spring, a spring season; spring, a happy season. In this beautiful season, I met the most beautiful you, let my little world bloom in this season, with its unique beauty.
  Let me hold you - spring

修改后：
Spring is coming quietly, but we still stay in the cold winter. It's time to forget the cold and embrace the warm spring.  Spring is a season of revival; spring is a season of happiness. In this beautiful season, I can see the colorful flowers blooming, and enjoy the birds singing.
Let me hold you, spring.

修改老師：Crystal 老師 

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